Mar 17, 2010

Sensational Haiku Wednesday - Generosity

Join me as I participate in Sensational Haiku Wednesday... link up with Jenn from You know... that Blog?

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This week's theme:

In silence she waits
Arms folded across her chest
Unmoving, he stares

One minute passes
Two minutes, three. One tear falls.
He swallows and sighs

"Tell me what to say"
She laughs, it's a choking sound.
"I shouldn't have to"

"I didn't mean it"
She shrugs one shoulder briefly
"No, you never do."

He looks to the side
Nervously, he licks his lips
He takes a deep breath

"I was wrong, I'm sorry"
She smiles at him, at his

"Of course I love you
I can't help but forgive you."
Their embrace ends it.

Just me, AJ


  1. Ah. A haiku and a love story all wrapped together in a really sweet prose. I really adore what you have penned. Excellent, Alyssa!

  2. I think I'll show this to my husband. Our fights never go this way. :)

  3. Do we get another installment. That was good...I am intrigued.

  4. I might have ended it with....
    and then she shot him.


    Depending on what he did of course, lol/


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